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Red Rain
« Thread Started on Feb 20, 2008, 4:45pm »		[Quote]
How is this for a twist ending?
Blood red rain

About to go insane

Everyone that I know

Are now food for the crow

Rain falling on my skin

Just as painful as a frozen pin

Soon they will come for me

Why can't you see?

I am watched by there hungry eyes

Just as the wild wind cries

Listen to me when I say

We will all die this day

As I sit here in this stall

I must say that is all

While I sit here I will pray,

I hope you have a nice day

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I hope luck is on your side.
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Re: Red Rain
« Reply #1 on Feb 20, 2008, 4:57pm »		[Quote]
Cool! I really like this poem... ^_^
Have you seen Sweeny Todd? It sounds like it could be turned into a song for that musical.
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Re: Red Rain
« Reply #2 on Feb 21, 2008, 3:23pm »		[Quote]
I did see that movie. I never thought that this poem could be a song in it.
Also, I wrote this before I saw the movie.
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